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Othandrea Downes's avatar

I really enjoyed the gripping and intense piece! Hope to read many more

Ian Cattanach's avatar

B.H. loved this one! If I had to describe this, I would call it pure frontier noir, and you captured that feeling like I've never read before. I feel like some people in the contest, overlooked the Desert as a setting angle, but I feel you nailed that! The idea of the desert digesting everything brought that to life. For the length of the story, I was impressed that you were able to bring out the feeling of vengeance as strong as you did! Thanks for doing this, and excited to see more of what you're doing, brother!

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