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Roi Aharonson's avatar

This is well written. I’m enjoying it.

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B. H. Schafer's avatar

Thank you! 🙏🏼 I’m glad you’re enjoying the story—I just released Part II and hope you enjoy the conclusion too 😁

https://bhschafer.substack.com/p/mindless-part-ii

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Layne Mercer's avatar

Great writing—kept me engaged for sure. This kind of subject matter is right up my alley! (I’m a psychiatrist and writer who often blends the two) Looking forward to part 2. Btw, my daughter’s name is Ivy! Kind of a rare one•

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B. H. Schafer's avatar

Thanks so much! That really means a lot, especially coming from someone with your background. I’m actually minoring in psych, so I had fun weaving some of that into the story. Part 2 drops tomorrow afternoon EST—hope you like how it all wraps up! And how cool about your daughter's name! Those neat little coincidences always make me smile lol.

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Hung Story's avatar

Please tell me and share with other authors.

Are you a pantser or a plotter?

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScZNMWvDwid83GA92rYIZu4Q7L81XIAgDsWC5QtGyZqoOPXfw/viewform?usp=dialog

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B. H. Schafer's avatar

sent in my response 👍🏼, hope it helps

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Andromeda A.M.'s avatar

I’m loving the tone and style of this piece! Great job! Can’t wait to read more!

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B. H. Schafer's avatar

Thanks! 🙏🏼

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Ciara Brooke Reese's avatar

Loved this. I’m hooked! Just subscribed

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B. H. Schafer's avatar

Haha, much appreciated! 😁

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Cade Robinet's avatar

Good work man! I liked the writing style and how the dialogue was presented. Looking forward to part two!

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B. H. Schafer's avatar

Thanks man! I'm glad you enjoyed this one

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